tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5636608488955044326.post7503273133389015561..comments2024-02-15T05:32:43.022-05:00Comments on Edge of Night: Poem: "Asleep By Nature"Eve Estellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16100366039767514954noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5636608488955044326.post-14483339915962101932018-08-04T04:29:11.517-04:002018-08-04T04:29:11.517-04:00Thank you, a.n.g! :D The brackets were a really fu...Thank you, a.n.g! :D The brackets were a really fun, new thing for me to try out, and layered meanings always make for a much more... well, <em>meaningful</em> piece lol. I hope to make more progress on the other parts to this, and soon!<br /><br />Thank you again! <3Eve Estellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16100366039767514954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5636608488955044326.post-77908546524902718682018-07-30T23:32:39.496-04:002018-07-30T23:32:39.496-04:00Wow. I really, really love this. I like the bracke...Wow. I really, really love this. I like the brackets and what the poem is doing here and how layered it is. Just amazing!a.n.g.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03667996517318905980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5636608488955044326.post-84930175838348914232018-07-07T19:07:57.177-04:002018-07-07T19:07:57.177-04:00:D Hahaha! The brackets were a new thing for me, a...:D Hahaha! The brackets were a new thing for me, and they were really quite fun (and useful -- easier, and like you said, bit more creative, than typical acrostic methods!). I think I'll be using them often.<br /><br />Very good!! lol. You found what the brackets spell out. Now, I'll give you a hint:<br /><br />- Hangman. What word are you being told to "define"? (What belongs in the empty spaces, what fits? Note the location of this line and what follows it.)<br /><br />- What does it take to disrupt momentum or to set something in motion (from a state of rest)?<br /><br />- What does this imply/how does it relate to the poem as a whole (including title)?<br /><br />I'm definitely planning on making it a short series -- we'll see what comes of it. I'm excited to see how it goes myself!<br /><br />Thank you, Quayla!! :D Also, thank you for the note you left in my Guest Book! Hard to believe it's been 3 years! But I'm very, very glad it has. It's been a pleasure getting to know you and writing alongside you. :)Eve Estellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16100366039767514954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5636608488955044326.post-85921389220024212982018-07-07T00:57:04.162-04:002018-07-07T00:57:04.162-04:00I keep reading this over & over trying to crac...I keep reading this over & over trying to crack the hidden message! XD This is really creative; the way it's written is so intriguing, and I love how you're using brackets to reveal a message too! ^.^ <br /> "Lift the wool _____ force"? I'm totally doing this wrong. *cries for eternity*<br /><br /> ANYWAYS, if this does end up being the 1st in a series, I'll definitely be looking forward to see how this poem connects with the others! ^o^Quaylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02576095669819923151noreply@blogger.com