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Jay in Winter
By: Eve Estelle
The jay's proud plumage
Stands out like a crystal brook
In glistening snow.
Author's note: This is another one that was written for my creative writing class (though I've since revised it a bit). It was my first attempt at writing a haiku, and it follows this basic structure:
- Three lines of 5-7-5 syllables, for a total of 17 syllables.
- Focuses on a specific moment in time.
- Typically on the subject of nature or the seasons, and often referencing one of them.
- Focuses on simplicity.
- Simple words and simple moments. No rhyme.
That was really good Eve! I used to write haikus when I was younger. Fun, no?
ReplyDeleteVery! :) I love how short and to the point the haiku tends to be. It's a great form for those quick, simple observations, and nature always makes for a wonderful subject to write about! I see haikus around the blogosphere a lot - never tried it myself before this one, though. There will definitely be more! lol.
DeleteThank you, Lisa!!
I really liked that! Thanks for sharing :)
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